Moriah Leila

Wow, very good. It grabbed my attention and I was totally enthralled once I started reading. I definitely want to read more, so PM me when you post more. Honestly, ...

Done! I need more, come on people!!! I have like hours upon hours to do reviews, please, give me more reviews, PLEASE!!! I'm begging you! Okay, sorry, I'll stop acting ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. But now I am here and I am ready to rip this piece to shreds. (If you don't mind.) ...

Rob Newmire walked from his home to his car. It was a very all-American setting. Heading out to his nine to five job, just early enough to beat the traffic ...

Hey Nutty, since you did such a FANTASTIC job with the last review I was wondering if you might have time to check out the rest of the series. Feel ...

Done! Okay, I quit my job today, so that means I have even MORE time on my hands. If anyone needs something reviewed, please don't be shy. If you've already ...

I didn't read any of the previous comments before me, so if I repeat something I apologize. Also, I am not going to attempt to correct your grammar since I ...

Veronica pressed a graham cracker crust mixture into the bottom of a pan and popped it into the oven. She turned to face the kitchen and was surprised by how ...

That itself wasn’t a surprise, only that they hadn’t yet caught or cornered me. That was about to change, I decided as I took a weary look down the short ...

This one is kind of short. So I'd really like to focus on the flow, entertainment value, and if you connect with my protagonist. Also, I'd liek to know if ...

So I am definitely interested in this piece. Clones? That's pretty cool. I'm not too good in certain areas of writing like grammar, so my main focus is going to ...

I really have very little to add. You are an amazing writer. I was reading this and thinking, you've got to publish this, because it is just so captivating. You ...

This made me so happy! I just wanted to shout, "AWESOME!" But I restrained myself. It was a struggle. Anyways, I have an awesome review for you and hopefully my ...

Yeah!! I'm so excited about reviewing this piece. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely want to read more. So, I am going to be brutally honest and a little ...

Hello! Since you did such a Glorious job reviewing my last chapter I was wondering if you could take at the new chapters that I've posted. I've been kind of ...